本文托福综合写作题目为罐头食品是否导致船员铅中毒死亡2015年12 月5日托福考试写作
| 托福综合写作范文Topic 议题：whether the canned food is the factor that contributes to the lead poisoning and the death of crew in Ka ship。 | ||
| Reading | Listening | |
| Sub-point 1 分论点1 | The lead that was carefully stilled to the can would not contact the food. | Company has limited time to finish this work. Workers are under time pressure and it is reasonable that they are careless and apply lead to the cans in a hurry way. |
| Sub-point2 分论点2 | No other evidence of death of the crew was found in other ship. | Sailors may be affected but they are not reported. First, it is difficult to judge whether sailors are affected by lead without careful tests. Second, the symptoms of lead poisoning are common, such as feeling tired or headache and they can be easily overlooked. |
| Sub-point 3 分论点3 | Water purification system may be the source of poisoning. | The water in the purification system is used for ship engineering since the salt water cannot be used. The water for cooking and drinking comes from a different way. |
托福综合写作范文Sample answer:
The writer and the speaker have a debate on the death of crew in Ka ship. The writer claims that the canned food is the factor that contributes to the lead poisoning and the death of crew, which is opposed by the following lecture.
First, the writer claims that the lead that was carefully stilled to the can would not contact the food. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him/her, company has limited time to finish this work. Workers are under time pressure and it is reasonable that they are careless and apply lead to the cans in a hurry way.
Secondly, the passage states that no other evidence of death of the crew was found in other ship. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that sailors may be affected but they are not reported. First, it is difficult to judge whether sailors are affected by lead without careful tests. Second, the symptoms of lead poisoning are common, such as feeling tired or headache and they can be easily overlooked.
Last, the writer argues that Water purification system may be the source of poisoning. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. The water in the purification system is used for ship engineering since the salt water cannot be used. The water for cooking and drinking comes from a different way.
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