本文托福综合写作题目为被关押的犀牛不能大量繁殖的原因2015年12月12日托福考试写作
| 托福综合写作范文Topic 议题 The reason that causes the low production of rhino in parks | ||
| Reading | Listening | |
| Thesis 总论点 | Three causes can explain the low production of rhino in parks. | The listening argues against the three reasons mentioned in the reading. |
| Sub-point1 分论点1 | Infertility results from the alfalfa and hay in animal fodder, which increasing it hormone. | Infertility can be cured by regulating the rhino’s hormone. |
| Sub-point2 分论点2 | Rhinos develop foot disease for often walking on the hard surface. | Advanced radiographic image equipment can detect the early anomaly of the bone and feet, which can heal the foot disease. |
| Sub-point 3 分论点3 | Brain disorder in the newborn rhinos makes them cannot live long. | The reason for the little rhino’s brain disorder is that its mother is so old that it carries toxic chemical element. So letting younger rhino bear child is one of the solution. |
托福综合写作范文Sample answer:
The reading puts forward three causes that can explain the low production of rhino in parks. However, the professor refutes these three strongly.
Firstly, the reading claims infertility results from the alfalfa and hay in animal fodder, which increasing rhino’s hormone. In contrast, the professor argues that infertility can be cured by regulating hormone.
Secondly, in the reading, it suggests rhinos develop foot disease for often walking on the hard surface. However, the professor disagrees. Advanced radiographic image equipment can detect the early anomaly of the bone and feet, which can heal the rhinos.
Finally, the reading suggests brain disorder in the newborn rhino makes them cannot live long. But the professor suggests that the reason for the little rhino’s brain disorder is that its mother is so old that it carries toxic chemical element. So letting younger rhino bear child is one of the solution.
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