本文托福综合写作题目为喂食器对鸟类有害2016年4 月23日托福考试写作
| 托福综合写作Topic 议题：feeders are bad for birds | ||
| Reading | Listening | |
| Sub-point 1 分论点1 | Birds gather easily, thus spreading diseases. | The diseases that spread in Hinch are always group-by-group. It has nothing to do with humans. |
| Sub-point2 分论点2 | Birds are exposed to predators. | If humans feed birds, extra nutrition will make them stronger and healthier, enhancing the speed of reproduction. The number of new-born birds will be larger than the number of dead birds. |
| Sub-point 3 分论点3 | It will influence birds’ migration pattern. | It will not disturb the pattern of natural migration, because birds will depend on shortened sunlight to decide the migration time. |
托福综合写作范文Sample answer:
The writer and the speaker have a debate on feeding bird during the winter. The writer believes it has negative influences on birds, which is opposed by the following lecture.
First, the writer claims that birds gather easily, thus spreading diseases. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him/her, the diseases that spread in Hinch are always group-by-group. It has nothing to do with humans.
Secondly, the passage states that bad weather results in shortage of food supply. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that if humans feed birds, extra nutrition will make them stronger and healthier, enhancing the speed of reproduction. The number of new-born birds will be larger than the number of dead birds.
Last, the writer argues that it will influence birds’ migration pattern. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. It will not disturb the pattern of natural migration, because birds will depend on shortened sunlight to decide the migration time.
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